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Post by Snake on Dec 29, 2006 23:40:42 GMT
Heres the first part I'll post the rest soon
That night her word had changed not for the better, but not for the worst. She was sat there in her new room crying. He didn’t love her, he just saw her as a best friend. He didn’t know how much it hurt her, for him to say that. She left the guys over a year ago, she had moved in with a friend but now she was on her own. She had found a new home, somewhere the boys couldn’t find her. She had to get away. She couldn’t face him not now anyway. She was still hurt.
Back with the McFly boys:
‘Dougie, you alright?’ Danny asks ‘Yeah, I’m fine,’ Dougie says ‘Ok, you know Abi moved?’ Danny asks ‘Really?’ Dougie asks ‘Yeah, she moved out of Bekki’s house and got her own,’ Danny says ‘Oh, ok,’ Dougie said ‘You alright?’ Harry asks ‘For flip sake, yeah I’m fine, now would you stop asking me,’ Dougie said ‘Ok, sorry I asked,’ Harry says ‘Oh guys you know that I said I was seeing a girl, yeah well she’s coming round tonight,’ Dougie says ‘Ok, what’s her name?’ Danny asks ‘Her names Katie,’ Dougie says ‘Ok,’ Harry says
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Post by jenni on Dec 29, 2006 23:43:19 GMT
Yaay this fic rocks!! ;D But only when Abi is happy! And I'm in it, And how cool isn't that?!
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Post by Camie on Dec 29, 2006 23:44:36 GMT
Aww what a great start hun, I absolutely love it... What happens next? I want more soon please?? can't wait ;D xxxx
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Post by Snake on Dec 29, 2006 23:46:10 GMT
Okies, I have more, let me post it
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Post by jenni on Dec 29, 2006 23:46:13 GMT
Yeeah! more ;D
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Post by Snake on Dec 29, 2006 23:47:08 GMT
The night, turned into day as she sat there, thinking about what she had left. She was going to try and move on, but her heart just kept taking her mind back to Dougie. Was he happy? Had he found someone? Questions she didn’t want the answers to, she just couldn’t help but wonder. A new set of tears came to her eyes and she read the text she had just been sent. He had found someone; she couldn’t go back, not like this. Dougie had found someone and now she was left heartbroken. She couldn’t stop the tears. She looked at her arms, the scars still there, she picked up the blade once again, the voice in her head was telling her she shouldn’t be doing this, but her heart was telling her that it was the only way to stop the pain from getting worse. As she dug the blade in, the blood started to pour, she looked around, and she saw the pictures of her and Dougie when they were mucking around in the park. She thinks about to those times and more tears form. However hard she tried she couldn’t stop the crying. Her phone started to ring. She answered it
‘Hello,’ She says trying to hide the fact she was crying ‘Abi?’ He asks ‘Yeah,’ She answers ‘Abi, you alright? I haven’t spoken to you in ages,’ Dougie says ‘Erm, yeah, I’m fine, how are you and what’s her name?’ She says ‘Abi, you know about Katie? How?’ Dougie asks ‘Oh I got a text from Laura, saying about you had a girlfriend,’ She says ‘Oh ok, well yeah, me and Katie, we’re alright,’ Dougie says ‘Ok, erm I got to do something, I’ll talk to you later, bye,’ She says and hangs up the phone
With the McFly boys:
‘Dougie, what did she say?’ Danny asks ‘Not a lot, she just said she’s fine and she knows about Katie, cause Laura, over there text her, telling her, and that she had to do something,’ Dougie says ‘Oh god, erm can someone get Bekki,’ Danny says running upstairs ‘What the?’ Dougie asks ‘Erm Dougie I think I get what Danny’s on about,’ Jenni says coming in the room ‘What?’ Dougie asks ‘This, I found it in her room,’ Jenni says holding up a blade ‘What the hell, she wouldn’t,’ Dougie says ‘Really, how would you know, you’re the reason she left in the first place, and now she knows about Katie, what else do you think she’s gonna do, worse than she already has been doing,’ Jenni says ‘She’s got a point there,’ Harry says ‘Yeah, but what am I ment to do, try and stop Laura from texting her saying I have a gf, and tell her I feel the same way about her, as she feels about me when I don’t,’ Dougie snaps and walks out ‘What the hell are you going?’ Tom asks ‘To see Katie,’ Dougie says
Back with Abi:
‘Bekki, you know how I promised I wouldn’t kill myself, I might brake that promise soon, I can’t take it anymore it’s got Katie, and I’ve got no one to love,’ She says ‘Abi, please don’t, you know you can always talk to me about this stuff,’ Bekki says ‘Yeah I know but I need Dougie, his what kept me alive for so long, as well as you, I need both of you not just you, I need Dougie as well,’ She says ‘Ok, but Abi, please don’t do it,’ Bekki says ‘Ok, I won’t, But I need him,’ She says
Back with Dougie:
‘Dougie I can’t do this anymore, I’m having an affair,’ Katie says ‘What? Please tell me your joking,’ Dougie says crying ‘I’m not, I’m sorry but I love him,’ Katie says pointing to a guy standing in the hallway. ‘Oh, I see how it is, ok, bye,’ Dougie says walking out of the house, and back home, he was crying as he reached the front door, he wiped his eyes, thinking that someone would still be in. He opened the door, not a sound, everyone had gone out. He was alone in the house, he went upstairs and just sat on his bed, with his head in his hands. He felt like nuts, he had made his bast mate move away and he had been cheated on. This isnt what he had wanted, he just wanted his best friend back, and he wanted a gf, but he all he could do was sit there crying on his bed
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Post by jenni on Dec 29, 2006 23:51:42 GMT
That pregnant dog Katie! Firts she broke Abi's heart by taking Dougie, And now she breaks Dougies heart?! That's what I call pregnant dogy!!
I'm happy I found those blades, So we can help my dear Abii!!!! <33
More ;D
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Post by Snake on Dec 29, 2006 23:54:46 GMT
'Abi, I know about the blades and you cutting your self, I know about everything,' Danny says 'Danny would you leave it,' She says looking away 'Abi, I can't I worried about you,' Danny says 'LEAVE IT,' She shouts and runs out She runs to the McFly house and runs up stairs, she stops at the top of the stairs to get her breath back, she hears fate crying, she fallows the sound, she looks at the familer door, she knocks 'Who...who is it?' he asks inbetween sobs 'Dougie?' She asks opening the door 'Abi, what are you doing here?' Doguie asks 'Well, I ran from Danny, and I was going to collect the rest of my stuff, but I head you crying, whats up?' She asks 'Well, I'm the reason you left, Katie was cheating on me, and she dumped me today,' Dougie says 'Aww no thats horibble Dougie, come here,' She says and gives him a hug 'Thanks,' Dougie says and gives Abi a weak smile 'Dougie wanna come over to mine and watch a movie, might cheer you up a bit?' She asks 'That would be nice,' Dougie says 'Oh and for you, I'm fine with being just friends, it may hurt for a bit, but still,' She says 'Aww Abi, ok,' Dougie says hugging her Dougie sorts himself out. Abi and Dougie both leave the McFly house and after a half hour walk they are at Abis house. 'So Dougie what movie you wanna watch?' She asks 'I dont know, just put anything on,' Dougie says 'Ok, I'll put back to the future on,' She says looking at Dougie who was looking around 'Ok,' Dougie says looking at her and smiling She puts the movie on and sits on the sofe Dougie hugs her, like when they used to watch movies together. She had miss this, now she was sitting there with her head on his lap watching back to the future, he looked down at her, she looked so beautiful he throught but then look back at the tv, he was starting to feel things for her, that he didnt feel for ayone but his special someone, but these feelings where stronger, he didnt know what to do, he know she loved him. SHe had said for him she would just be friends if thats what he wanted, but he was starting to want more......
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Post by jenni on Dec 29, 2006 23:58:04 GMT
Aaaw movie night, I love back to the future! ;D Good chocie Abii! Ok..I'm just gonna be kinda random and write some nasty words and see what happends to them... pregnant dog,sleeper,f**k,d**n... HAHAHA xD
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Post by jenni on Dec 29, 2006 23:58:41 GMT
Haha the sleeper word was hoe... (H O E, W H O R E ) don't use these words..I was just very random and now I woke up and I don't remember doing it!
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Post by Camie on Dec 30, 2006 0:04:32 GMT
wow amazing adds.. Poor dougie, and that Katie girl is so stupid!!! glad you made up and woop for the feelings ;D great fic more please ;D
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Post by Snake on Dec 30, 2006 0:07:47 GMT
'Abi?' Dougie asks 'Yeah?' Abi says 'How much did it hurt?' Dougie asks 'What? how much did it hurt that you said you didnt feel the same and you liked someone else?' Abi says 'Yeah,' Dougie says looking into her eyes 'More than you could know Dougie, it hurt so much, and it still does,' She says Dougie could see the tears in her eyes, she looked away back at the screen, but Dougie pulled her back to face him 'I'm sorry Abi,' Dougie says and with that he leans down and kisses her after they pull apart she just lays there not knowing whats going on, was this another dream or was this real? she looks back at Dougie, who had a worried look on his face 'Say something,' Dougie says 'Wow,' is all she could say as a smile appers on her face 'You know your beautiful,' Dougie says 'Aww thanks, your really cute, and you happy now?' she asks 'yeah, I got my best friend back....... and I got her as my girlfriend,' Dougie says smiling they hug and Dougies phone starts to ring 'Let me answer it,' she says 'Ok, who is it?' Dougie asks 'it's Laura,' She says laughing
'Yo,' she says 'Hey who is this?, and where is Dougie?' Laura asks 'Laura you prat, its me, oh and my Dougie is here with me,' she say 'Abi?' Laura asks 'Yes Laura, thats my name and dont wear it out,' she say 'Omg, Abi Dougies with you,' Laura says 'Yeah man, and his my Dougie,' she says 'What? are you two going out now?' Laura asks 'Yeah man,' she says
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Post by Snake on Dec 30, 2006 0:08:24 GMT
I have to go soon, so thats the last add for tonight, I'll add more tomorrow =]
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Post by jenni on Dec 30, 2006 0:11:01 GMT
Aaw you're together again!!! ;D YAAAY,YAAAY,YAAAY! <3333
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Post by jenni on Dec 30, 2006 0:11:48 GMT
I have to go soon, so thats the last add for tonight, I'll add more tomorrow =] Yeeeah, I'll be here wating for it tomorrow!
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